I finished the first chapter in my new story called The Knuckle-Smash Kid. I am going to break it down into five parts and post one part a day. On day six (Friday) I will post a PDF of the chapter. My goal was to create a little humor, a little (ok very little) romance and a little fun with the western style story. It maybe a little slow in the beginning. I wanted to set the world up so the rest of the story can be plot and character driven. Outside of some monologuing in my book and the sequel I am working on this has some of the most dialoged I have ever written. If you include the protagonist talking to you as the narrator then it is almost all dialog. I made a separate page for this story so it will hopefully be easier to read. I am really having fun with this story. More so than I thought I would. I just hope that you the patient reader will find my childish ramblings legible and maybe even likeable. Thank you for your time, patients and understanding.
Michael Collins is a Delivery Driver and an amateur writer living in Lakemore, Ohio
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